Dustin, Chris, Jonathan, and I hell bent for a good time. We packed up Chris's jeep with our sleeping bags, other mindless items, and of course the best thing to bring on a camping trip other than beer, acoustic guitars. Jonathan and I have been working on an acoustic album for months and we thought of this as a perfect get away to finish our album. This is the perfect trip to strengthen our friendship we all thought to ourselves as we rolled out. My friend's have always been my family, the ones that where always there. We discussed our futures of being well known musical artists on the way up there just as we have for years. Our dream, one that has never died. We where always the ones that where never popular and we never had tons of friends but we have always had each other. Since the day I started high school. What brought us together was our love for music and our ability to play an instrument. We are arrive relieved that our work week is done and we are out in the wild finally chilling. We unpack but of course Dustin being Dustin heads straight for a bottle of beer. He takes a swig and yells "LET THIS NIGHT EVER END"! We all stop what we are doing and grab a beer and cheer with him. Chris sets up the tent as dawn breaks and we all set our sleeping bags in it. Dustin and I grab the diesel from the jeep and soaked a log with it. We stack twigs and brush into the fire and Dustin throws his half lit cigarette into the fire. It ignites the diesel and the fire begins to crackle. "Isn’t it beautiful", Chris says.
"Yes its magnificent the colors of orange and reds swirl and mixing as if they are making love"."Dude, I'm sick of this man all we do is work our asses off and have nothing to show for".
"Yea we do bro we all have each other".
"But sometimes I mean don’t you want more wonder if there is anything better".
"We all do bro we all hope and dream for those things man but things can only happen so fast, but what if we go no where what if we are another joke of a band like the last one that came through town."
"We aren’t even close man we are who we are and we do what we do"
"Yea I suppose".
"Life sucks sometimes man but you know what you do when life brings you down you grab your guitar".
We all grab our guitars and start to play around on them joking and laughing drinking beer.
Kipp - Your dialogue is good! I would, however, like some differentiation between your characters. I really don't know who is saying what. How could you fix that with more description?
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